Well, it was supposed to be a traditional mass design. I got the lots of flowers part right, and I think the colors work, but the form of the design and the placement of the flowers is off. See how the orange lily at the top throws off the balance? And the two Liatris next to it destroy the symmetry. The point of interest is too high, and the yellow roses seem static rather than helping to create rhythm. I’ll have to work on this style.

Traditional Mass Design (attempt!)

Traditional Mass Design (attempt!)

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